IAL a character description

WALT: Write a letter using a character description

This was in between it was hard and easy

First we planned secondly we wrote a first paragraph then we wrote a 2nd paragraph and published

I learned to write a letter properly

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Swimming

In room 10 and 11 we have been doing swimming and learn new skills each Friday. Swimming is helpful and important for you because once you learn to swim and the steps are very important  to remember
and saving people but also overcoming your fear of heights and you have to jump in to the deep end.

Swimming can be dangerous because if you dont know how to swim and you go to the beach with no adult supervision or someone watching you, you could drown and no one could be watching so you could just float out to the sea and no one can get help or save you or if you are lucky then a helicopter could be flying on top of you and they could spot you. Another thing if you are with people you huddle up and sing because then if you are in a shark area you scare them away  or you will call a dolphin so that will also scare the sharks away.