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Tuesday 13 September 2016

The Cindy Olympics

Lindy wanted to do the Olympics but she needed to choseAug 18, 2016 12:04:34 PM.jpgAug 18, 2016 12:05:38 PM.jpgAug 18, 2016 12:03:26 PM.jpg
A topic she wanted to do pole vault but her dad said that she could use a rock to do
Shot put and Cindy decided to use sheep paddock for the
Discus Cindy wanted to warm up for the sports events and on
The day she used the sheep to through and the sheep
Pushed back and fell into a big bucket of water and broke her leg so she couldn’t compete for a very long time.
we were learning how to use topics sentences and now i can use them ofently

1 comment:

  1. Hi Rhumour, I really like your catchy title to this blog post. Your story is great but maybe when you copied the text for posting all the full stops disappeared because your story is one very long sentence?

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