WALT: Use facts to support our ideas

This week we have been writing a letter to our prince able. To have her permission to plant trees we decided  to  plant trees to help build oxygen and save the trees that are getting cut down.  First we had to write a draft,
Then show our teacher then we had to write the real letter. Then check it with our teacher then we had to publish it to our blog then we are done.

Please leave a positive Comment and Hope you enjoy:)

IALT: be more brainy ?.

this week we have been learning  to do banking issues and  when we  looked at it. it  hard so we said to sally it looks hard and then she said to try it. And then see if it was hard so we tried  it  and it was confusing so then we said sally can you help up and she said have you ask three people before me and I said yes and so then she helped me and then when she explained it to me it made more scene so now it's easy :)

please leave a good comment :)

thanks

IAL My speech

This was very hard to come up with an a idea for my writing but then in the future it got easier.

First I made a plan.

Secondly I wrote my first paragraph and draft

Lastly I wrote the rest then revised and edited it.

My resource was the revise and edit card.

Please leave a positive comment and some positive feedback.

IAL Find patterns using mixed with operation

WALT: Find patterns using mixed with operation

IAL Use Rhyme, Rhythm, Repetition, Alliteration

WALT: Use Rhyme, Rhythm, Repetition, Alliteration
We had to read a speech and highlight it and then learn what it meant.  Then we made a poster about it and then we had to make a Screencastify about it and that's the steps we took
it was hard to highlight the right thing, because we were going crazy about the highlighters
but it was easy to make the poster. I hope you enjoy reading and watching me and my friend explain what it meant

IAL a character description

WALT: Write a letter using a character description

This was in between it was hard and easy

First we planned secondly we wrote a first paragraph then we wrote a 2nd paragraph and published

I learned to write a letter properly

please leave a positive comment and some good feedback

Swimming

In room 10 and 11 we have been doing swimming and learn new skills each Friday. Swimming is helpful and important for you because once you learn to swim and the steps are very important  to remember
and saving people but also overcoming your fear of heights and you have to jump in to the deep end.

Swimming can be dangerous because if you dont know how to swim and you go to the beach with no adult supervision or someone watching you, you could drown and no one could be watching so you could just float out to the sea and no one can get help or save you or if you are lucky then a helicopter could be flying on top of you and they could spot you. Another thing if you are with people you huddle up and sing because then if you are in a shark area you scare them away  or you will call a dolphin so that will also scare the sharks away.