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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Friday, 15 September 2017

IAL Class Rules!

This Week we have been doing posters for the manners so we can learn when  we are not using our manners. plus what the rules are. Plus  and just to show what our rules are in room 11 at park estate school we had to take some pictures first then  we had to send it to sally ( our teacher) then were done. !!

Friday, 1 September 2017

WALT: Use facts to support our ideas

This week we have been writing a letter to our prince able. To have her permission to plant trees we decided  to  plant trees to help build oxygen and save the trees that are getting cut down.  First we had to write a draft,
Then show our teacher then we had to write the real letter. Then check it with our teacher then we had to publish it to our blog then we are done.

Please leave a positive Comment and Hope you enjoy:)

Friday, 11 August 2017

IAL My speech



This was very hard to come up with an a idea for my writing but then in the future it got easier.

First I made a plan.

Secondly I wrote my first paragraph and draft

Lastly I wrote the rest then revised and edited it.

My resource was the revise and edit card.

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Thursday, 3 August 2017

IAL Use Rhyme, Rhythm, Repetition, Alliteration

WALT: Use Rhyme, Rhythm, Repetition, Alliteration
We had to read a speech and highlight it and then learn what it meant.  Then we made a poster about it and then we had to make a Screencastify about it and that's the steps we took
it was hard to highlight the right thing, because we were going crazy about the highlighters
but it was easy to make the poster. I hope you enjoy reading and watching me and my friend explain what it meant

Tuesday, 25 July 2017

IAL a character description

WALT: Write a letter using a character description


This was in between it was hard and easy

First we planned secondly we wrote a first paragraph then we wrote a 2nd paragraph and published

I learned to write a letter properly

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Friday, 5 May 2017

Raindrop drop top

WALT:  the water cycle and how it works we had to make a plan and a diagram so we could write our real story first we had to  then when we finished writing we had to publish it then post it. please leave me positive and helpful comment thanks

Thursday, 13 April 2017

Do you breath air?

WALT: this week we have been learning how to use our Sc to check our work.
I learnt that you don't really need to use cups and arms and we read books and then we had to plan . We just need to look at the Sc and will actually help us that was easier for me. I hope you enjoy reading my blog post and please leave a helpful  comment.

Wednesday, 22 March 2017

May the Force be with you

WALT: write about forces We made paper planes and we watched some video to understand what force is really, then we  talked about it.

if you want to see a video here is on  here  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5t1frJFPSBg
I thought making a paper plane was easy because I have already made one before and I found out what was hard trying to understand what  force is.  Like what is motion, gravity, or the four forces of flight and trying to use forces but luckily Miss Avern helped us by doing demonstrations for  us.